Friday, May 22, 2009
Journal #6 Chapters 16-19 from the perspective of Judge Taylor
I woke with a loss of purpose. My eyes were dispelled of all emotion. I felt nothing, I surely must have been in a dream. I then walked like a ghost, with no recognizable gait, out of the bedroom where Victoria was laying her head, still sleeping. During these few minutes of bliss, where my mind was a complete blank slate.
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2 comments:
You definatley could have wrote a lot more then this...
You could write about when they were in the court room, or try to exaggerate some of the few moments that involved juge Taylor.
I'm not sure if there is an error on blogger but your post needs to be a lot longer. I really liked the description of Judge Taylor waking up though.
I liked the vocabulary you used, it painted a better picture than dull, normal words. I like "I felt nothing, I surely must have been in a dream. I then walked like a ghost, with no recognizable gait" because this really painted a picture of Judge Taylor just waking up.
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